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Hi I need a theme for this poem.

The cold chilly air wraps around me
I blow my breathe out and look to the sea
Beyond the sea lies a great big tree
I looked at it with wonder and glee
The temperature drops, I feel it get colder
I step on the ice and hear a small crack
My arms wrapped around me as I smoldered my shoulders
I fell down, into the sea taken aback
The water is soothing but my body is refusing
My muscles felt stiff as I looked to the sky
My heart starts to thump
Am I going to die
My eyelids go shut, my body stops moving
I sink to the bottom as my heart stays unmoving.

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The theme might be the story of a poor man during high cold

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