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Hey everybody on the internet I started a story and I want your honest opinion

here it is



Hi my name is Farah I would like to tell you a story about how my life changed in one flying swoop It all started when my parents were getting ready for work

Do you remember Dew?



DEW (Farahs brother)

No, I wasn’t there remember, I was at a friend's house when this all happened but boy, I wish I was there





FARAH

OK so back to the story my parents were getting dressed when my mom went to the closet to grab her coat that’s when she saw it THERE WAS A WHOLE WITH A LADDER IN THE TOP OF THE CLOSET



DEW

Still scares me to think about it





FARAH

Me too Dew, anyway my parents went to call the police why my dad guarded my mom just in case. When the police came, they did a search and found A MAN HAD BEEN LIVING IN OUR HOUSE FOR A YEAR. He had pictures of us all over the attic walls we were so creeped out we moved to a new country.

User GaRRaPeTa
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Answer:

it seems really good but

Step-by-step explanation:

sorta blnd tell how and why their life chenged

User Alexandru Dicu
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Answer:

you nice keep going..

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