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Read the excerpt from a summary of the Declaration of Independence.

[1] The Declaration of Independence is beautifully written. [2] Jefferson argues that everyone has the right to life, liberty, and the pursuit of happiness. [3] It is a government’s job to protect these rights. [4] When a government fails, Jefferson asserts that the people can overthrow their government.

Which sentence should be revised to make this summary more objective?

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Answer:

[1] The Declaration of Independence is beautifully written.

Step-by-step explanation:

The word "beautifully" is subjective.

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