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Can i get some feed back on my written story and let me know about my character description on the second page ..? ENGLISH!!

Can i get some feed back on my written story and let me know about my character description on the second page ..? ENGLISH!!
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Can i get some feed back on my written story and let me know about my character description on the second page ..?

ENGLISH!!

Can i get some feed back on my written story and let me know about my character description-example-1
Can i get some feed back on my written story and let me know about my character description-example-1
Can i get some feed back on my written story and let me know about my character description-example-2
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I think it’s good and I love how you came from a different approach I would’ve taken, there’s a sense of familiarity with this and I don’t think you need to change anything!
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