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is this a good thesis statement, Women made a great impact during World War II. explain why or why not.​

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No.

Step-by-step explanation:

Although this thesis utilizes weak diction, it does however make a statement. To improve this thesis, you should compartmentalize more assertions about your topic followed by an explanation and use stronger vocabulary.

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