Question

Is this a good freestyle poem

Do you have a recommendation
What would people say if I were gone?
What would they write on my tombstone?
In 10 years would they even remember me?
If I don't even like myself why would people like me?
I feel like I am carrying my problems up a mountain, people have tried and helped but after a while, they just walk away.
Someone asks me can you take some of mine, of course, why not.
I feel like I am letting myself be crushed by my own problems but I want to help everyone else.
I don't want anyone to feel like I do so I try to take their problems to.
I have taken to many I am finally falling.
I am falling off the mountain will anyone even try to stop me from falling or will they let me go.
Let me go. Let me go.
Sometimes I wish someone would save me because I have been trying to save myself for too long.
But others times I wnder do they really want to help me or do they just want me to take some of their pain?

Answer 1

Yes that is actually a good free verse, it contains emotions, questions, ( rhetorical) it don't have a repletion, a word that repeats in each stanza, but yes it is very good i actually showed this to my teacher and she said it was good :)