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Choose the sentence that is in the best order.

Waiting for the dentist, a story in Boy's Life interested me. Or

A story in Boy's Life interested me while I was waiting for the dentist.

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The answer is number 2, "A story in Boy's Life interested me while I was waiting for the dentist."

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2nd Sentence

Seems more complete and is easier to read.

A story in Boy's Life interested me while I was waiting for the dentist.

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You could change the first sentence to:

While waiting for the dentist, a story in Boy's Life had interested me.

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