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What is the best way to rewrite this sentence?

A.
The cashier, thoughtlessly presented the man, with a worn ripped dollar bill.
B.
The cashier thoughtlessly presented the man with a worn, ripped, dollar, bill.
C.
The cashier thoughtlessly presented the man with a worn, ripped dollar bill.
D.
The cashier, thoughtlessly presented the man with a worn ripped dollar bill.

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The answer is C, because there is a description for the dollar bill, and there needs to be a pause
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Answer:

D

Step-by-step explanation:

because the coma is at the front of the cashier

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