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The Everyday monster causes Caroline to be unable to make her own decisions occasionally. The Everyday monster makes Caroline affect other people. This problem with the everyday monster can be solved. And based on some research Caroline must develop some strategic routines to help her.

Is my thesis ok i need help help me fix it plss!

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Two things NEVER start a sentence with And (I learned the hard way) and after research put a comma other than that it looks fine.

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