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What is wrong with this sentence: Now that he is injured, Jeb gets less exercise then he used to, but he is also eating less calories than he used to.

(btw ik it's supposed to be than but i was wondering if there was anything else wrong)​

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Answer:

-"then" should be "than"

- the sentence isn't necessarily a run-on, but it could be simplified to "Now that he is injured, Jeb gets less exercise and eats less calories than he used to."

hope this helps! best of luck <3

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Answer:

Its a run on sentece, you should have a period. So : Now that Jeb is injured, he gets less exercise than he used to. He is also eating less calories then he used to.

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