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Read the sentence. Mr. Richardson is shopping for the perfect shelf on which to display his bowling trophy. How could a writer best revise this sentence to avoid overly formal language?
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Read the sentence.

Mr. Richardson is shopping for the perfect shelf on which to display his bowling trophy.

How could a writer best revise this sentence to avoid overly formal language?

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Mr.Richardson is shopping for the best shelf to put his bowling trophy on.
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Answer:

by choosing to end the sentence in a preposition

Step-by-step explanation:

took a test on edge

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