Read the sentence. Mr. Richardson is shopping for the perfect shelf on which to display his bowling trophy. How could a writer best revise this sentence to avoid overly formal language?

My account
Edit my Profile
Private messages
My favorites

Ask a Question
Questions
Unanswered
Tags
Categories
Ask a Question

asked Apr 1, 2021 38.0k views

2 votes

Read the sentence.

Mr. Richardson is shopping for the perfect shelf on which to display his bowling trophy.

How could a writer best revise this sentence to avoid overly formal language?

English
high-school

Ethaan asked

by Ethaan

6.0k points

0 Comments

Please log in or register to add a comment.

Please log in or register to answer this question.

2 Answers

2 votes

Mr.Richardson is shopping for the best shelf to put his bowling trophy on.

Pompey answered Apr 2, 2021

by Pompey

5.8k points

0 Comments

Please log in or register to add a comment.

4 votes

Answer:

by choosing to end the sentence in a preposition

Step-by-step explanation:

took a test on edge

Mathew Varghese answered Apr 5, 2021

by Mathew Varghese

7.0k points

0 Comments

Please log in or register to add a comment.

Ask a Question

Welcome to QAmmunity.org, where you can ask questions and receive answers from other members of our community.

6.6m questions

8.7m answers

0 Comments

Please log in or register to add a comment.

Please log in or register to answer this question.

2 Answers

0 Comments

Please log in or register to add a comment.

0 Comments

Please log in or register to add a comment.

Other Questions