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This introductory paragraph is missing a hook:

Nutritionists say that seafood is healthier to eat than other kinds of animal protein. It is low in fat and cholesterol, and high in
the omega-3 oils that promote both heart health and brain development. Current United States Department of Agriculture
guidelines suggest that Americans eat two to three seafood meals a week. Unfortunately, most Americans do not consume that
amount of fish. However, even if Americans were willing to eat more fish, would the world's seas be able to provide it? Where
will all this fish come from? Many people think that the answer is aquaculture.
Which of the following options would be the most effective hook?
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Most Americans eat beef, poultry, or pork on a regular basis.
The average family rarely includes fresh fish in their diet for various reasons.
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If you enjoy eating baked fish, shrimp gumbo, crab cakes, or boiled lobster, you're in luck.

This introductory paragraph is missing a hook: Nutritionists say that seafood is healthier-example-1
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Answer: if you enjoy eating baked fish shrimp gumbo crab cakes or boiled lobster your in luck.

Step-by-step explanation:

it draws a connection to the reader making them want to read and wonder why they are in luck

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If you enjoy eating baked fish, shrimp gumbo, crab cakes, or boiled lobster, you’re in luck.

This one would draw people in to the topic. Especially if they enjoy seafood, they might also be interested in the article because it has to do with the consumption of fish.
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