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Read the sentence.

And so, when Chloe’s wedding dress finally arrived, she decided to resell it online and hoped to recoup her money.

The writer wants to revise the sentence to clarify why Chloe decided to sell her wedding dress. Which revision most accurately achieves this effect and is written correctly?

And so, when Chloe’s wedding dress (finally) arrived, she decided to resell it online and hoped to recoup her money.

And so, when Chloe’s wedding dress finally arrived nearly a week after the wedding; she decided to resell it online and hoped to recoup her money.

And so, when Chloe’s wedding dress finally arrived, she decided to resell it—online—and hoped to recoup her money.

And so, when Chloe’s wedding dress finally arrived—nearly a week after the wedding—she decided to resell it online and hoped to recoup her money.

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Answer:

And so, when Chloe’s wedding dress finally arrived nearly a week after the wedding; she decided to resell it online and hoped to recoup her money.

Step-by-step explanation:

That would be my answer

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User SJX
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Answer:

tridition

Step-by-step explanation:

its a weding tredition

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