Question

Revise the following​ paragraph, improving it without changing its overall meaning. Pay particular attention to the use of clauses. ​ Sue follows the same routine each day Sue goes to work. Sue wakes up at 7​ o'clock in the morning. Before showering and brushing her teeth for five minutes Sue does stretching exercises.​ Wow! She sure is a disciplined person. Her breakfast usually consists of cereal and fruit with a quick cup of​ Sue's favourite coffee. Before sitting down to eat she fills the bowl belonging to Jordan with cat food and a small treat of canned tuna. After breakfast, it is time to get ready for work.​ Sue's clothes are always clean and pressed the night before. Blue is​ Sue's favourite colour and her pants and shirt and socks are all shades of blue. Even her shoes are blue. Sue gets​ dressed and decides it is time to leave. Picking up the newspaper Sue gets in her​ car, pulls out of her driveway. Once upon the​ road, Sue begins her​ day, and she turns on the radio.

Answer 1

The paragraph is revised to improve its overall meaning and the use of clauses are modified.

Step-by-step explanation:

To revise the paragraph and improve its overall meaning, we can make some changes in the use of clauses. Here's the revised paragraph:

Sue follows the same routine each day: she wakes up at 7 o'clock in the morning and does stretching exercises before showering and brushing her teeth for five minutes. Her disciplined nature is impressive. Her breakfast usually consists of cereal and fruit with a cup of her favorite coffee. Before sitting down to eat, she fills the bowl belonging to Jordan with cat food and a small treat of canned tuna. After breakfast, Sue gets ready for work. She always prepares her clothes the night before. All her clothes, including her pants, shirt, socks, and even her shoes, are different shades of blue. Once dressed, Sue picks up the newspaper, gets in her car, and pulls out of her driveway to begin her day. As she hits the road, she turns on the radio.

Answer 2

Answer: Sue goes to work every day with the same routine. Sue gets up every morning at 7:00 a.m. Sue does stretching exercises for five minutes before washing and brushing her teeth. Oh my goodness! She is a very disciplined individual. Her typical breakfast consists of cereal and fruit, along with a cup of Sue's favorite coffee. She fills Jordan's bowl with cat food and a small treat of canned tuna before sitting down to dine. It's time to get ready for work after breakfast. Sue's clothing are always freshly laundered and ironed the night before. Sue's favorite color is blue, and she wears blue pants, a blue shirt, and blue socks. Her shoes are also blue. Sue gets ready and makes a decision ,It is now time to depart. Sue gets in her car and pulls out of her driveway after picking up the newspaper. Sue starts her day by turning on the radio once she's on the road.

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