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Quinn hid the rest of her Halloween candy, but it was still found and eaten by her two brothers.

Which is the best way to revise this sentence so that it is consistently written in active voice?
A
Still being found by her two brothers, Quinn's Halloween candy was hidden.

B
Quinn hid the rest of her Halloween candy, but her two brothers still found and ate it.

C
The Halloween candy was hidden by Quinn but found and eaten by her two brothers.

D
Quinn hid the rest of her Halloween candy, while her two brothers were eating and finding it.

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Answer:

B. It is the clearest answer. The others are hard to read and don't make sense.

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