Question

Hey Professor, Heres my final version of the paper that we got to do for class. I hope you like it. I pulled an allnighter to get this in on time. Zzzz : ( Give me a shout if ya think I should change anything. But dude, IMHO I gotta say that this one is off the hinges!!! Later, Your favorite student ;) Why is this message ‘poor’ or ineffective?

Answer 1

The student writing this wrote very informally and inappropriately. Words such as “ya,” and “IMHO” are not appropriate for an email to a professor.
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