Question

Are these complete sentences, or is one of them a fragment?

Moana and I couldn't have asked for a better beach day. Especially when the wind picked up, the conditions were perfect for flying our kite.

Answer 1

one of them is a fragment, it's the latter sentence.

Step-by-step explanation:

it seems that the second sentence has gotten it backwards.

the beginning part "especially when the wind picked up" is what makes it a fragment.

doesn't it make better sense if it were written in this way instead?

"the conditions were perfect for flying our kite, especially when the wind picked up."