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Please help. look at the attachement.

Please help. look at the attachement.-example-1
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Answer:

1. The lunch crowd buzzed as I sat at a table of two near the door, when surveying the menu until I landed at a list of appetizing ingredients

2. I replied. please I'd like to have your Bibb lettuce with dressing on side and no beets

3. they brighten a vibrant golden yellow plate like sunshine

4. I've learnt that they aren't food that I don't like, just foods that I haven't liked yet and, who knows?

Step-by-step explanation:

1 I replaced the sentences above with these words ( of, when, at)

2 I rearranged the sentence making it more appealing and adding this words (to have)

3 I made the sentence look More narrative and bringing out the picture of the word making it more easy to understand

4 at this point the "really" wasn't necessary and i made it so easy to spot adverb

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