Question

Can someone tell me if this makes sense?

The central idea of this article is to communicate to reader the unequal pay of the U.S soccer team. Throughout the years the U.S. soccer team has been getting payed a substantially lower amount than the men's. The article states that "each played 20 exhibition games a year, men could earn an average of $263,320 each. Meanwhile, women players could earn a maximum of $99,000 each." showing the numbers that prove that the team gets lower pay and even with more credibility the team has still not been shown any back pay " winning three World Cups, and U.S. Soccer over their compensation and treatment compared with the men's team, which has accomplished far less, never winning a world title and failing to qualify for the 2018 World Cup."

Answer 1

you need to add some commas and you need to add "the" in front of reader

The second sentence doesn't make sense.

Step-by-step explanation:

I would suggest using Grammarly and proof reading your work at least 3 times out loud.