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I’m begging somebody to arrange this poem and add more details to make it make sense this is due tomorrow

The man walked across the ground waiting for the very found sound he waits and triumphs when it’s done for he had taken a flower gun the flower screams in pain and and fall petals revolving in metal bars

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The man walked across the ground waiting for the very sound he awaits

triumphant screams when it’s done for he had taken a flower gun

the flower is gone

the petals of metal fallen, heaving

only a machine of bullets left.

I don't know if it's better or if the punctuation is even correct, but I tried.

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