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Read the sentence.

The women worked tirelessly in massive places to produce war materials.


Which revision best improves the sentence by replacing weak language with vivid language?


replacing tirelessly with hard

replacing massive with huge

replacing places with factories

replacing produce with make

User Cerno
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Answer:

C

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User Nacnudus
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Answer:

replacing places with factories

Step-by-step explanation:

it cannot be any other becoz all the others changes from vivid to weak language

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