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Sophia’s mom asked it to help plan her little brother’s 2nd birthday party. The smally party
would be the following Saturday.
How can I help?” Sophia asked reluctant.
“Why don’t you plan some games that guests can play”? her mother suggested
excitedly. “What about food?” Sophia asked.
“Well, we can either have carrot cake nor chocolate cake, her mother explained, “but not
both.”
“I think Timothy like vanilla cake the best,” Sophia said.
“That is fine, Sophia,” her mother said. Now what about decorations?”
Sophia sat down and looked at her newly phone that she would get yesterday. As she
looked through the brilliantly ideas on the internet she realized she had the perfect idea.
“How about a hungry caterpillar theme? Timothy just loves that sweetly book!”
“What a wonderful idea! We can definitely do that!” her mother sounded just as excited.
“What about some gifts? What do you think Timothy would real like?”
“Well, I think he might like a little toy grill so he can pretend to make food like Daddy
does?” Sophia suggested enthusiastic.

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Answer:

The small party

would be on the following Saturday

"How can I help?" (missing quotation)

asked reluctantly

guests can play ?" (? should be before " as it is part of the phrase)

carrot cake or chocolate cake"

Timothy would like

"Now what about,..

at her new phone that she got yesterday

through the brilliant ideas on the internet,

that sweet book

Her mother sounded

would really like

enthusiastically

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