can someone please make sure this poem sounds right? lmk if i should change anything (it has to relate to the picture

Andrew Guy asked Nov 20, 2023

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Andrew Guy asked Nov 20, 2023

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I think stanza one is great. Stanza two could use a bit of revising - I like the idea of the farmer providing for his family, though.

DSchultz answered Nov 25, 2023

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