Question

Which is the most fluid revision of the following paragraph?

The tornado was huge. It left a path of destruction five
miles wide. No one was injured. The damage was
extensive.
A. The tornado was huge and left a path of destruction five miles wide. It did not injure anyone, but the damage was extensive.
B. The huge tornado left a path of destruction five miles wide. While it injured no one, it caused extensive damage.
C. While the huge tornado did not injure anyone, it left a path of destruction five miles wide and caused extensive damage.
D. None of the above

Answer 1

Hi,

Option C. While the huge tornado did not injure anyone, it left a path of destruction five miles wide and caused extensive damage. is the correct answer.

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