Can someone help with my story. We have to create a story that is 2 pages longs. Please tell me what you personality think.
I am Hyakkimaru Amami and this is the story of “Hope’s Peak Academy” the 80th division. It started when I was going home from my first day of high school in Hakia. I was walking on the sidewalk admiring the pink cherry blossoms and then I suddenly remembered my mother wanted me to get ingredients for miso soup for dinner tonight. So I checked my backpack for some money, I had some, but I forgot to close it. Then a gust of wind came and took my English essay assignment. As an instinct I chased my papers as the wind was dancing with them, slowly picking them up one by one as they fell on the street. I kept picking them up until I realized how far away I was from my home and the city. Then I saw the last paper, right when I was about to pick it up, I looked up and saw a large, old, crumbled-down building. Then I picked the paper up, right when I was about to leave, I saw a sign. But I wouldn't make out what it was because of the moss and dust on it. Because of curiosity, I took the yucky moss off, then I blew the sight hard. “Coughing” After that, I read what the sign said, it said “Hope's Peak Academy”. Right, when I was about to leave, I was blinded by a bright white light, not knowing where I saw going, I stumbled into the building and that's where it all began.