Question

HELP i need to write A literary analysis and i started it but i think it sucks- i need help. i attached what i wrote already.

https://www.sabanciuniv.edu/HaberlerDuyurular/Documents/F_Courses_/2012/Dead_Mens_Path.pdf

also thats the link to the short story :) whoever helps me i love u with all my frreaking heart

Answer 1

This is fairly good, although you have many grammar mistakes.

Step-by-step explanation:

Change 2 to two. After you say us, put a period. And after he sees a women by the flowers, just finish the sentance. NO comma. Also, describe Obi. How he looks older than he is.

Other than this, good job!