Question

Can u guys help me fix my thesis?

This this my thesis : The value of life is determined by who the type of teenagers / adults you are.

And this what he wants me to fix : what type gives value to life? Your thesis has to take a position.

Answer 1

I think you should say "Teens/adults who grew up in a good environment have a better value of life." (or sometimes its vice-versa).

You can also say "Teens/adults who were thought important lessons in life grow up to have a better value of life." (because we learn from those things)

Hope this helps:)