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HELP Writing Journal Entry: The caravan has reached its final destination - Antioch, the western end of the Silk Road. You are one of the few people to travel the entire length of the route! Reflect on this once in a lifetime achievement. Has the journey turned out the way you hoped? Was the long journey worth the difficulties you endured? How do you feel about the return journey? Record your thoughts in your journal, making sure to respond to the four prompts above. Your response should be at least 5 sentences long.

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Dearest Journal,

Today I and my few companions have achieved something beyond imaginable! We have completed our journey along the Slik Road. Althoug we had some troubles with robbers a few times, I'm glad to say we made it out safely, except for Peter. Unfortunatly we lost him during an open fire, he was a wonderful friend and a terrific man. I'm still writing this as we journey to his home to break the news to his wife.

Aside from the most unfortunate loss, we suffered numberous other issues. Weather, almost starvation, at some point we almost ran out of money and the roads themselves are not the friendleist. As I sit in the back of our wagon I still bump my head against the cotton covering every now and then due to a bump or two. As we travel back home and are nearing the end, I think upon our experiences and all I've learned during this time. I don't believe I'll ever forget this.

Perhaps in the near future I'll settle down, have a family and tell my childern and tell theirs and so on. This was a story that is not to be forgetten for as long as I live.

- Sincerly ( Insert your name )

I reccomend paraphrasing if you must and also spell check because my spelling is terrible ;-; Hope it helps!

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