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Read the sentence:

The sky was pretty that morning.
Which revision makes the sentence the most vivid?

A.
Pretty colors and clouds were in the sky.

B.
That morning the sky was a pretty color.

C.
Gold light spilled from a rupture in the sky.

D.
The sky was full of light that morning.

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Answer: C:

Explanation: We do not know if the sky has clouds so cross off A, B, And D

A---X

B---X

C--- ! ! !

D---X

Hope it helps and have a great day.If it is incorrect my next guess would be D.

User Khaleelah
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Answer:

A, B and D aren't really that interesting. C is the best option!

User Monica Cellio
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