Question

Uh hey. Please don’t report it’s for school, I’m supposed to write a poem and this is what I have so far:

My skin
To me my skin is of gold
Shimmers in the sun ever so bright and glowing
But you don’t see that
To you, my skin is a threat
To you my skin means I shouldn’t leave to see another day
To you, my skin gives you the right to shoot me
To you, my skin means I don’t deserve to live
To you, my skin will never be accepted.....


Is it ok? Please be honest

Answer 1

this is amazing!!!

Step-by-step explanation:

it really portrays what poc have to go through because of their skin color. i love this poem so much. good job! <3

Answer 2

your poem is not bad just a lil more rhythm and you'll be good,