Question

Choosing the right dog to adopt is a big responsibility that takes some thought and planning. To begin with, there are hundreds of breeds of dogs available to pet owners. They all have the potential to be great pets, but not every breed is right for every person. For example, Veterinarian's Weekly categorizes a Jack Russell terrier as a high- energy breed. My aunt has one, and that thing is crazy! It needs walks like 24/7. Therefore, it would be best suited to a very active family that has a large yard and a walkable neighborhood. In addition to energy level, pet owners should consider the size of their dog How could this excerpt from an essay best be revised to clarify meaning and enhance style? O A. Use evidence that supports the topic sentence more clearly. B. Clarify the topic and purpose in the topic sentence. C. Use transitions to clarify the flow of ideas D. Maintain a formal style.​

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Answer: I would say stick to a formal style. The formality would help make the overall meaning of it seem for crisp. Taking out little comments here and there and just getting right to the point would help the evidence really stand out and support it much better.

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