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Which of the following statements is the stronger beginning in a personal narrative? Choose the correct answer.

With shaking hands, I slowly turned the key in the lock, not daring to breathe.
I turned the key in the lock, wondering what was behind the door.
I was scared to open the door and not sure what I would find behind it.

I think its "With shaking hands, I slowly turned the key in the lock, not daring to breathe".
Sorry if i get it wrong '^'.

User RSinohara
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Answer:

your right

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User Felix Loether
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I think you're correct! Well done ^^

Step-by-step explanation:

"With shaking hands, I slowly turned the key in the lock, not daring to breathe" sounds like a very strong narrative based on "with shaking hands" and "not daring to breathe".

Hope I helped!

- Aria

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