Question

Rewrite the paragraph below using proper punctuations.     

I have a dog it is name is Labrador he is black in color. he wags his tail and licks my face when he is happy i tell him come Labrador sometimes he screams at me Gwaau. he loves going for walks and chasing a red ball I take him to school sometimes once he sees a black cat he wants to chase it but I dont let him is he mad at me I dont know but I hope he isnt I love my dog very much because he always obeys me and follows me everywhere.
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Answer 1

You could rewrite it a multitude of differing ways, but I’ll resort to not changing or adding a single word.

I have a dog, its name is Labrador. He is black in color. He wags his tail and licks my face when he is happy. I tell him, “Come, Labrador!” Sometimes he screams at me, “Gwaau!” He loves going for walks and chasing a red ball. I take him to school sometimes. Once he sees a black cat he wants to chase it, but I don’t let him. He is mad at me. I don’t know, but I hope he isn’t. I love my dog very much because he always obeys me and follows me everywhere.

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