Question

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That feeling that happiness
When you fall for someone
Flowers begins to thrive in your bosom
You start to imagine the things
You want to do with them
But the flowers start to fade up
When the person matches your vibe
Do not look at you the way you look at them
That is the dreadful feeling ever
Cause the things you imagine is just break in the blink of an eye
At night you don't want to think about them
Don't want to conceive the beautiful scenarios with them anymore
But this heart, who gonna understand this dummy heart
That person is not yours neither will be
That person was never yours
We have to say goodbye to those sweet-sour feelings.


what do you think guys what does it like writing, poem?? please ans:))​

Answer 1

ohhh my goodness your poem is amazing lv it ❤❤❤

Answer 2

its amazing:

tips: that feeling, that happiness

"the flowers start to fade up" doesn't make much sence maybe try the voyd of emotion inside your soul is no longer empty and floods like a fountain LOL maybe not but try like something like that or compare it to something

and the suggestions i gave is if you mean that person likes you back but if your trying to say they don't than ignore all my suggestions other the adding a comma after "feeling" and say fade away