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Do you think that this is good tell me your honest opinion ​

Do you think that this is good tell me your honest opinion ​-example-1

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It has a lot of detail, and I like it! The only thing you need to add is correct capitalization and punctuation. To be honest, when I read that it sounds like the kind of text I would see in a book, and that's great!
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