Question

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a Choose one of the following prompts.
Write a five-sentence paragraph using chronological order and including a topic sentence to explain the steps you would take to complete one of the following tasks.
Cleaning your room or your home

The first step I make in cleaning my room is to take out all the cups, plates, and bowls. After that I will pick up all my clothes and put them in my hamper. Then I will pick up all the trash and sweep my floor. After that I will then get new bedding and make my bed, then I will take my dirty clothes to the laundry room and start a new load of Landry, after that, I'll go back to my room and mop and dry my floors so that they will be clean. After my laundry is finished, I will then take it back to my room and fold and put it away.
And that is my whole proses for cleaning my room step by step in chronological order.​

Answer 1

Answer: The first step I make in cleaning my room is to take out all the cups, plates, and bowls. After that, I will pick up all my clothes and put them in my hamper. Then I will pick up all the trash and sweep my floor. Next, I will get new bedding, make my bed, take my dirty clothes to the laundry room, and start a load of laundry. Then, I'll go back to my room and mop and dry my floors to keep them clean. After my laundry is finished, I will bring it back to my room, fold it, and put it away. And that is my whole process for cleaning my room step by step in chronological order.​