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Read the sentence.

In spite of the fact that she was a young girl at only ten, Becca made the decision to begin writing an autobiography of the story of her life.

Which revision best reduces the sentence to make it easier to understand?


Although Becca is only a ten-year-old young girl, she decided to begin an autobiography to tell her life's story.

In spite of the fact that she is young at only ten, Becca has decided to begin writing the story of her life.

Becca may only be a young girl of ten, but she has already decided to write.

Although she was only ten, Becca decided to begin writing her autobiography.

User Jdm
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Answer:

D

Step-by-step explanation:

I took the test.

User Vinit Payal
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Answer:

The last one

Step-by-step explanation:

"Although" is more straight to the point,

"autobiography" itself will suffice even without extra explanation.

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