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Which choice avoids fragments to present the information clearly and correctly?

Mr. Lang's fundraiser was a success because of his teenage daughter's computer skills. His website received a ton of donations. People loved it. Her sleek design and funny videos. It attracted a large crowd.

Mr. Lang's fundraiser was a success because of his teenage daughter's computer skills. His website received a ton of donations. People loved her sleek design and funny videos. Attracting a large crowd.

Mr. Lang's fundraiser was a success. Because of his teenage daughter's computer skills. His website received a ton of donations. People loved it. The sleek design and funny videos attracted a large crowd

Mr. Lang's fundraiser was a success. Because of his teenage daughter's computer skills, his website received a ton of donations. People loved it. Her sleek design and funny videos attracted a large crowd.

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Answer:

The answer is D. Mr. Lang's fundraiser was a success. Because of his teenage daughter's computer skills, his website received a ton of donations. People loved it. Her sleek design and funny videos attracted a large crowd.

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Answer: Mr. Lang's fundraiser was a success. Because of his teenage daughter's computer skills, his website received a ton of donations. People loved it. Her sleek design and funny videos attracted a large crowd.

Step-by-step explanation:

The option which avoids fragments by presenting the information clearly and correctly is option D "Mr. Lang's fundraiser was a success. Because of his teenage daughter's computer skills, his website received a ton of donations. People loved it. Her sleek design and funny videos attracted a large crowd".

Option A is incorrect as it contained many fragments and made the sentences short and incomplete.

Option B is wrong as the lat sentence "attracting a large crowd" shouldn't be written as a sentence on its own. There were fragments which resulted in the information not to be presented clearly.

Option C is incorrect as a comma should be after "Because of his teenage daughter's computer skills" rather than a full stop. A comma after the phrase would have presented the information better and clearly.

The correct option is D.

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