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Read the sentence.

A forest surrounded the lake.

Which is the best way to revise this sentence using descriptive detail and sensory words?

A forest surrounded the lake that was in the middle of the trees.
A forest of trees sat in a circle around the round lake in the center.
A thick forest of scratchy pines surrounded the crystal clear lake.
A green forest went around a lake in the middle that was blue.

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Answer: A thick forest of scratchy pines surrounded the crystal clear lake

Explanation: Sensory is like touch, so it would have words that describe how something feels with words like "Scratchy"! <33

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