Question

One advantage of public transportation is people don’t get stressed driving. They can relax, read a book and work on a crossword puzzle. It also affords commuters the opportunity to meet new people and interact.

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Answer 1

Answer: One advantage of public transportation is that people won't get stressed driving, reading a book, and working on a crossword puzzle. They also afford computers and with a computer they have an opportunity to meet new people to interact with online.