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Our neighbor Patrick has fruit trees on his property. "Patrick what
kinds of fruit do you grow?" I asked. "Well I grow peaches apricots
pears and plums" he replied. "Wow! That's quite a variety" I said.
Patrick's son Jonathan helps his dad care for the trees. "Oh it's constant
work and care" Jonathan said "but the delicious results are worth the
effort." After harvesting the fruit Jonathan's mother Allison cans the fruit
for use throughout the year. She makes preserves and she gives them
as gifts for special occasions. Allison sells some of her preserves to
Chris Simon the owner of a local shop. People come from all over the
county to buy Allison's preserves.
Jonathan's aunt Christina grows corn tomatoes beans and squash in
her garden. Each year she selects her best vegetables and enters them
in the fair. She has won blue ribbons medals and certificates for her
vegetables. "Oh I just like being outside. That's why I enjoy gardening"
Christina said. Christina's specialty squash-and-tomato bread is one of the
most delicious breads I have ever tasted.

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Our neighbor, Patrick, has fruit trees on his property. "Patrick, what kind of fruits do you grow?" I asked. "Well, I grow peaches, apricots, pears, and plums," he replied. "Wow! That's quite a variety," I said. Patrick's son, Jonathon, helps his dad care for the trees. "Oh, it's constant work and care," Jonathon said, "but the delicious results are worth the effort." After harvesting the fruit, Jonathon's mother, Allison, cans the fruit to use throughout the year. She makes preserves and gives them as gifts for special occasions. Allison sells some of her preserves to Chris Simon, the owner of a local shop. People come from all over the county to buy Allison's preserves. Jonathon's aunt, Christina, grows corn, tomatoes, beans, and squash in her garden. Each year she selects her best vegetable and enters them into the fair. She has won blue ribbons, medals, and certificates for her vegetables. "Oh, I just like being outside. That's why I enjoy gardening," Christina said. Christina's specialty, squash-and-tomato bread, is one of the most delicious breads I have ever tasted.

NOTES: Some of these may be up to writer's discretion. Each item in a list should have a comma, including the item before the "and." In dialogue, if someone makes a statement that doesn't end the sentence, end the quote with a comma instead of a period. (Example: "Cool," they said.)

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Our neighbor Patrick has fruit trees on his property. "Patrick what

kinds of fruit do you grow?" I asked. "Well I grow peaches apricots

pears and plums" he replied. "Wow! That's quite a variety" I said.

Patrick's son Jonathan helps his dad care for the trees. "Oh it's constant

work and care," Jonathan said, "but the delicious results are worth the

effort." After harvesting the fruit Jonathan's mother Allison cans the fruit

for use throughout the year. She makes preserves and she gives them

as gifts for special occasions. Allison sells some of her preserves to

Chris Simon, the owner of a local shop. People come from all over the

county to buy Allison's preserves.

Jonathan's aunt Christina grows corn tomatoes beans and squash in

her garden. Each year she selects her best vegetables and enters them

in the fair. She has won blue ribbons medals and certificates for her

vegetables. "Oh, I just like being outside. That's why I enjoy gardening"

Christina said. Christina's specialty squash-and-tomato bread is one of the

most delicious breads I have ever tasted.

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