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Which revision makes the meaning of the underlined

sentence clearer?
O I like respect as treating others as important, as
appreciated, as worthy.
O I like to think of showing respect as treating others
like they are appreciated and important.
Thinking of respect, showing others is about
appreciation and worth.
O Showing respect is about treating important others
with worth.

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Answer:

The second circle is the best revision.

Step-by-step explanation:

Everything is more clear and the words are in the right area.

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