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Spot the error

When children take few exercise, their health could be affected.
Too many violence in computer games is said to have a negative effect on children.

User Jace
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Answer: I would change "many" to much to make the sentence grammatically correct. I would also change "take few" to don't- It makes more sense.

Step-by-step explanation:

When children don't exercise, their health could be affected. Too much violence in computer games is said to have a negative effect on children.

I hope this helps ;)

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