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Read the sentence.

I work at the community garden.

Which revision most improves the sentence by adding description?

I like to work at the community garden because it has a multitude of things growing there.
Sometimes I work at the community garden since it is nearby and beneficial to everyone in the community.
There are plenty of vegetables, flowers, and plants at the community garden where I work.
The mixed aroma of spicy garlic and sweet roses tickles my nose when I work at the community garden.

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I would say, “There are plenty of vegetables, flowers, and plants at the community garden where I work.” It’s descriptive and helps paint a mental picture without being too over the top
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