Question

Which of the following sentences would be most appropriate in a speech about computers and delivered at a national business electronics conference?

O The computer has changed my life, and it's pretty much the most awesome invention of the twentieth century.
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Both Sentences would be appropriate.

This new networking system can change the way businesses share information, making the transfer of daily information highly efficient.

Answer 1

Answer: This new networking system can change the way businesses share information, making the transfer of daily information highly efficient.

Answer 2

The second one that says “this new network system can change the way businesses share making the transfer of daily information, highly efficient”