Question

The following text includes run-on sentences and fragments. Your task is to fix the mistakes by rewriting the paragraph.

Last July, my family and I travelled to London it was my mum’s birthday, she turned 50! When we arrived at the hotel we were shocked by the long queue at the check in desk. The receptionist was super nice upgraded us to a beautiful suit. Left our luggage and headed to Harrods. The weather was incredible it was sunny and breezy. Since tired we did not stay out for long.

The next morning, my brother and I on an adventure on our own. We took a taxi to the London Eye it was phenomenal! Loved the ride and the views. After lunch we fish and chips it delicious.

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Last July, my family and I traveled to London, it was my mum’s birthday, she turned 50! When we arrived at the hotel we were shocked by the long queue at the check in desk. The receptionist was super nice upgraded us to a beautiful suite. Left our luggage and headed to Harrods. The weather was incredible it was sunny and breezy. Since we were tired we did not stay out for long.

The next morning, my brother and I went on an adventure on our own. We took a taxi to the London Eye, it was phenomenal! Loved the ride and the views. After lunch we had fish and chips it was delicious.