I need honest (even harsh) opinions on these song lyrics.
"I wish that life was longer, wish I had more time
To tell you how I feel and what's been on my mind
I wish that someday, I'll get a chance to say what I want to say
I wish that I was stronger, wish I had the words
To tell you that I love you so much that it hurts inside
I wish I didn't lie awake at night
Sleepless, always thinking about you
Wishing I didn't have to live without you
But I know, oooh
I'll be dancing by the wishing well
For the rest of my life
Wishing for the impossible
You are the impossible
I'll be singing by the wishing well
A song of hope
Waiting on a dream that will never come true
That dream is you"
It's just a start but I need some ideas, opinions, thoughts, critiques, whatever!!