Question

Students in Patrice's English class publish an online journal of their reading. Students,

parents, and teachers visit the site. Here's the beginning of Patrice's latest entry.
(1) Recently, 1 read "Twenty Thousand Leagues Under the Sea." (2) At first, I didn't expect to
enjoy it. (3) After all, it's over a century old. (4) But, dude, I couldn't have been more
wrong! (5) The plot combines scinece fiction, travelogue, and political thriller. (6) Here's a
brief summary.
What revisions and edits should Patrice make for his purpose and audience?
(A) In sentence 1, add the words "the novel" before the book's title.
(B) Put the title of the book in italics rather than quotation marks.
(C) Delete sentence 2, which is unnecessary information.
(B)- In sentence 4, change the word "dude" to "people."

Answer 1

Answer: the last choice D

In sentence 4, change the word "dude" to "people."

Explanation: since his directed audience are students teachers and parents he should use more proper and appropriate language

Hope this helps^^