Question

‎Which revision of the passage best uses the images to develop the main character? ‎

‎ (1) Steve walked into the ‎
‎ café. (2) He smiled at the delicious smells floating in the air. (3) Feeling very hungry, he looked at the selection of sandwiches and salads in the display case. (4) He then chose a sandwich and paid the cashier. (5) He was ready ‎
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‎ for lunch 12 ‎
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‎ of 13 QUESTIONS Change sentence 4 to "He selected a sandwich and paid ‎
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‎ the cashier, who told him to have a good day" Change sentence 3 to "He stared at the snacks in the display case with the ferocious gaze of a hungry wolf." ‎
‎ Change sentence 1 to "Steve went into the café." ‎
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‎ Change sentence 2 to "The smell of coffee and fresh -The baked bread made him smile." ‎

Answer 1

The revision of the passage which best uses images to develop the main character is '' He stared at the snacks in the display case with the ferocious gaze of a hungry wolf.'' Because this sentence implies his character and develops his character with his ''ferocious gaze''...

Steve went into the cafe. The smell of coffee and freshly baked bread made him smile. He stared at the snacks in the display case with the ferocious gaze of a hungry wolf''. He selected a sand which and paid the cashier, who told him to have a good day.